FLY AWAY PETER (Blogprint)

Dec 12 2007  | Views 700 |  Comments  (16)
You had to hand it to the architect who designed our office building. He knew how to design a death... Expand

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  Fernandes E E posted 8 mnths ago

Dear Sushmita,

wow, you really know haow to weave a story. Just shows good writers do not need to spread their wings very far to get down to business. Doen't it give you a lovely feeling to have done something so noble?
My congratulations on the feat and your superb narrative style. Koop bhalo.

Edwin Fernandes



  Avinashjee posted 8 mnths ago

Sushmita,
Just an anecdote but told with dexterity so that i really held my breath for a long time. Sometimes we too fall into a 10ft deep and six inches wide gap and do not know what to do. Sometimes God sends a plastic bag and sometimes he does not.
Avinash



  Aditi Ray posted 8 mnths ago

This made a very nice reading, was watching breathlessly with you and it was such a relief that the pigeon lived!!!



  prats35 posted 8 mnths ago

i'm sure the pigeon is now praying for all your happy lives and being thankful about it too...captivating story!



  santosh samuel posted 8 mnths ago

What a lovely story ! I was thinking of what other ways could have been tried. Fold a cardboard into an L shape about 4 inches wide and lower it in the hole. Move it towads the pigeon till he steps on it and pull him up.

Santosh



  anna9 posted 8 mnths ago

cheers , yeah , cheers , to all of you and to Peter . Hip hip hurray to the humble plastic :)



  meanders posted 8 mnths ago

what a beautiful story...that bird must still be flying up there looking after you 



  Usha M posted 8 mnths ago

sweet..glad that it got out safe..enjoyed the narration.



  vinita54 posted 8 mnths ago

wow i liked this! prayers like this are always answered, don't u think? i like it if our hearts can sink to the depths at the sight of a fallen bird and then soar high in the blue sky with it....



  VETY posted 8 mnths ago

A touching situation narrated with pathos it deserves. A good read Sushmita.





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